Camp bentzon

camp

Next week on Tuesday, the year 6’s get something special.There will be lots of activities that we will be doing there. We’ll do the Burma trail, kayaking, orienteering, fitness trail, and sailing. I’m looking most forward to the volley ball. So I’m really excited.

weekend

In the weekend I was drawing with chalk in my driveway with my sister and my brother. Then me and my brother went out to the internet cafe and played SRT3. And then I went to the pools. On Sunday me my brother and my dad went fishing and caught 13 snapper and 3 yellow fin but sadly we had to release them.

I Heard a Whisper

Glrchling mud under my boots. Back from the old rusty shed “why me why can’t my sister do my work she’s old enough!” looking at the ground frowning with milk splashing on the tip’s of his boots. “Why do you stick up with this” a voice whispered thru the wind “who said that?” looking around like a gang of people were circling him “it’s me” the voice answered “who’s me” he asked “for me to know and you to find out” the voice said.

Thinking hard he wondered could it be my dad that passed away or nan or even papa? “all this is making me sad” still forgetting that he just heard a ghost and his mums milk. “Here ghosty wosty” looking pathetic starting to showing his bum to the other animals. “hello pigs how you doing” talking to the pigs like he was crazy “do you want a cup of tea or a cup of mud?” “oink” “thats what you always say”.

Sitting down to have a rest he heard the whisper another time “Its me nan” “holey moley nan are you talking to me” “Yes” the voice answered “wow” “don’t tell your mum she will think you're crazy” “okay nan” he repliyed. “So can I talk to you whenever I want to nan?” “yes but I think that your mum is getting angry at you I think that you should bring the milk to her” “okay nan”. “See you next time I ment hear you next time” “that would be nice” bye nan but nothing replied.

Black Ops 2

Falling over as I failed trying to get the remote before my brother and hearing laughter in the kitchen. “I get to choose the game” shelford said okay Black Ops!. “Im player one then because its 2x XP week. And thats when I got my DSR-50 gold because I got 25 blood thirstys and got my KSG art of war. And I got the new map pack for Xbox but is soon to come out on ps3.

WALT: Show not tell when writing a paragraph

Narrative Farming

In the year 2025 a man called Bob and his wife jonah had a farm and crops of corn. One mysterious night jonah heard a noise outside her window and Bob hear it as well “Honey can you hear that?” Bob shouted “Yes” jonah replied then both Bob and jonah heard a BIG THUD. I’m scared jonah said to Bob “I think that i’m more scared than you jonah” as the room filled with the stench of digestion eww jonah said to Bob. One hour passed and the rolling thunder was getting louder.

both Bob and jonah were arguing about who would go outside and see what was happening. After all the fuss jonah was the one that was going outside it ended up that they had to do paper scissors rock. jonah found out that there was something in the truck that made it blow up.

The next year jonah and Bob were divorced and they lived happily ever after.

Roller Coster Narrative

Two BFF called michael and Myers went to a fair in auckland known for the fair fall. Myers saved money to go to Rainbow’s End and Myers was looking forward to this day because the last time he was there Myers was only five. “Wooooo” both friend’s said once they were getting dwarfed by the massive Fair Fall “I think that we should ride the less towering rides don’t you think Michael” yeah okay.

As both boys were riding the six year olds ride “ were like six years too old for this ride”. Michael spotted the girl that he liked since he started school at five years “isn't that the girl you like Michael?” “first her name is Victoria and how did you know that I like her?”

“you always steer at her in class”. Michael changing the subject “hay did you catch anything yesterday with your dad?” “No only bate but it was fun”.

After finishing the younger kids rides Myers wanted to go on the rollercoster “okay im kyen”. Then Michael finding Victoria in the line in front of them Victoria looking back at Michael and calling to say hi to Myers Michael started to go red in the face “your friends with her” “yeah” Myers rolling his eyes. Lets go on another ride.

“See told you not to stand up in the log” Myers said to Michael as Michael dripping with water. “Now we have to go home only if you weren't scared of a girl this wouldn't have happened” with water running down Myers face “sorry I should have listened to you” “apart from that the day went awesome we should come back here okay” Michael saying to Myers.

Maui and the sun

Maui and the sun from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Sheep

Today our literacy group were given a job to unscramble unscramble unscramble pictures for farming. And one of the pictures was a sheep that was so sick that it froze from the in sides. So I learnt that if you don’t look after your sheep they can get worms maggot diseases. And there are things to help the animals.

Organic Orchard

Marjorie Clark is a owner of an organic orchard in Kerikeri New Zealand. In 1984 Marjorie Clark’s found out that bugs were eating her plants but she didn't want to spray her fruit because Marjorie didn't want to kill the bugs that eat bugs like the green vegetable bug and beetle. She was tempted to pull out a spray gun but she didn't. And it was sold to make juice. But she lost a lot of money over it.

Marjorie prepared the compost for the worms and let wasp welcome in her house. Five years passed and her orchard was good as new.

Movies

the most exciting thing I done in the holidays was when me my brother and my support worker went to see Percy Jackson at hoyts. Once we got there we went to JB-HI-Fi. Then we saw Iisa and he was going to the movies.

Just as the movie was starting we got some popcorn a drink and we got a free ice cream. But when we were in the movie there were lots of people were talking but the movie was awesome. I hope I get to watch the third movie.

My weekend

In the weekend's me and my family walked down to the beach. Me and my sister and my brother played on the playground and I fell off the swings. Then my sister got board and we walked back home and then we played a kinect on the X-box. Once we played BOII and I made my brother prestige master.

The brave little tailor

Title: The brave little tailor

Author:brothers Grimm

Characters tailor layer, giant strong guy , king scared guy daughter

Setting: Germany

What was the problem The little tailor was lying to everyone

What was the solution he stopped lying lied

My favourite part of the story was?

hasel and gretal follow up

Title:Hansel and Gretel

Author:Brothers grimm

Characters Hansel step mum dada gretel witch

    

Setting in a poor cottages

What was the problem the step mum told their father to take his children into the forest and the witch was going to eat the children

What was the solution?Throw witch into the pot

What was the Moral of the Story?

My favourite part of the story was?When the mum died

Little red ridding hood

little red ridding hood DLO and movie.

The hare and the tortoise

My name Fazy because it rhymes with lazy. I’m always eating grass slowly too and hibernate.

Just as usually, eating grass all day long because I  just got out of hibernating this Hare called Lighting was signing signatures . He is like his brother Speedy. Lighting comes along and makes trouble with me, I don't know what's his problem is.

A fox called Eric that comes from the bushes and sticks up for me. I just kept eating while Eric becomes this know  it all. He told Lighting that I will win but I thought I had no chance. Then Eric said “Did you know that he is a hibernator” Lighting said “that means he is sooo lazy.”  “NOOO that means he sleeps

through winter” Eric replied angrily.

Then Lighting ask “ok  then why won’t we have a race to the forest and back.” Then Eric said “ok  then if Fazy wins you and your slowly group work for him.”  “And if I the fastest animal win you have to do what I say.” “Then it will be tomorrow at quarter past 1.”

The race day and Fazy or the Tortoise was stretching his legs and we started the race. Then Fazy took off  and Lighting was just standing there laughing at Fazy. “you stupid Tortoise you will never defeat me,” said Lighting. “Well see

mission bay

In the weekend I went to mission bay with my dad my sister and my brother. We looked for the best car's around. When we got to the beach we started to draw with stick's in the sand. My dad drew a dragon and I drew a bird and a creeper.

We left the beach because it was to windy and my brother forgot his jumper and we went to the look out and we saw a rusty wheel chair. Then we went to look at the houses then we went home 

Lost

At the start in March, 2001 there was an attack that happened against me, my sister who wears nappy's with dairy all the time and is sooo slooow, and some friends. It was some random people and they tied me separately to my sister called Francis. My body had scars and bullet marks. I didn’t know where my friends were but I knew that they weren't safe.

I tried to get out but my body was stinging like bees was sting in the same spot. Then my younger sister who works for the Nava broke out and the prison guard snap her and  set the alarm off and the captain Martin came and shoot her with a M1911 in his spine and took him somewhere and that’s when I knew to kill Martin for killing my brother.

Then I finally broke out and act like I didn’t. Then I yelled out to the guard when he was by his self “over here”. He came and said “shut” then I got his face and smack it against the door and he was knocked out. I quickly grab the keys and free myself. Then I grab his knife and quietly stab the guard I knock out.

Then I seek my way out and saw one friend of mine. It was a boy called Brock and Martin was there talking to him. Brock was on a chair tied up and the captain Martin was making him suicide and then he went and I thought to myself here is my chance to kill that guard and free Brock. Then I quietly killed that guard and threw his knife at the other guard. I disarmed the alarm and untied the rope. I told him to jump the fence while I hide the body’s. I threw the chair over and climbed the fence. I saw a car coming pass so I tried to hide but there was no where to hide. I ran off because people were trying to shoot me and I slide down this mountain and saw a bridge and water was down there. I jump in the water and this man save my life.

Then I grab a knife and thought he was one of them but he pull out his knife and stab me. I was stuffing and I wanted to kill him but I was to weak. Then I faded out and I die.

The modernised ugly duckling

Title:  Wolf Life

Start Writing Here

On a early monday 2001 in New Zealand, there was a mother wolf. Her name was call Shrim and the father was named Bob. The mother wolf borned a wolf and they name him Jack. Jack was the youngest

Jack was grey and had green patches. He was really different to the others. Jack wish that he can be like the others. They had black patches and some were white. His brothers and sisters were mocking him and the mother want him out.

The sound Jack made was like a chicken. Bu burke bu burke to the others. Wolves were laughing and Bom and Shrim was a shame. Jack ran off and hid behind a tall tree covered with grass and sheep was there. He bit it but it ran off after that and Jack was hungry.

Then a neighbour whisper to Shrim “he’s ugly and hurts mine ear shaming for you’s. Ain't you gonna kick him out of your house or be a shame.” Shrim or the mum replied quite sad “yes I going to do it when Bob can look after his own self.” That late at night when only the dad was awake Jack had to be like a ninja and seek out. Then he went off.

Jack was cold and rain started to turn in gales.  Jack stomach was starving and then he found a place and had light. The door was left open so he went in and slept under the bed which was near the fire.  He was warm and when the sun was rising the next morning he was about to go out then a old man snap him. Jack quickly ran out and went off.

Jack was thrusting and hungry so he went around trying to find food as well as water. When he saw a pond he drank it and  one tenth was out of it. Then he saw a wolf running pass and saw a hunter so Jack seek like a ninja and followed the wolf. The wolf was his mother and he found his way back home.  

State of Origin 2013

State of Origin QLD vs NSW 2013