Thursday, May 30, 2013

A snoopy chimpanzee who solves a crime

Once upon a time there was a snoopy chimp called lee that solves a crime?. One day there was a chimp woke up and found that his banana Benz that he bought the day before was stolen. He knew that it was gone because there was banana peels all over his front yard.  Lee knew that he couldn't buy another car because the car that he bought was the most expensive banana in the junglehood.

So Lee knew that he had to start an Investigation but Lee had  never had a crime science in his property. The next day he put up reward posters and he looked in the other jungle because Lee wasn't the smartest thing in the world. Just as all hope was lost Lee could hear sirens and and a German engine made by orang-outangs and Lee had to do something and fast so Lee jumped out in front of the car thinking he was in heaven the banana was Lee’s. The gorilla police asked Lee “you could have reported that your car was stolen”.


  1. Hi Brandon that was so funny that post I liked it so much keep up the good work!!!

  2. Hi Brandon that was fun to read I like how lee was a crime solver keep up the good work

  3. What a neat piece of writing Brandon! I liked how you started a sentence with 'just as all hope was lost', that was very clever! The story line was very neat too. I could see it all happening in my head. Keep up the great writing.

    Love Miss Lavakula