Today is the first day of camp it is awesome and we have two more days we did a lot of tacks but the best one of all was coking over a fire we made damper and marsh mallows I hope the rest of camp is going to be good.
I really liked your story but I think there were some places that supposed to have full stops. Any ways I still liked it. I really did like cooking damper over the fire, even the part when we got the chance to eat it with Golden Syrup. Yum!! That was nice. Hope you enjoyed the camp because I certainly did.Well that is all for now, can't wait to see more, Keep up the good work.
hi brandon
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DeleteHi Brandon,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story but I think there were some places that supposed to have full stops. Any ways I still liked it. I really did like cooking damper over the fire, even the part when we got the chance to eat it with Golden Syrup. Yum!! That was nice. Hope you enjoyed the camp because I certainly did.Well that is all for now, can't wait to see more, Keep up the good work.
God bless.
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