Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Adding Detail to Sentences

Today miss king wrote up on the board a phrase for us to add detail to. It was "invented the spaceship".
I added detail to the beginning and the end of the phrase.
Here are my sentences:
1. lee inventedthe furst ever space ship that succeeed
2.goco fo draon ball z invened the smallest space ship that crashed.
3.the chidren at pt England school invented the space ship that went though the sun without buning

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